Wow this was amazing! I had an idea of the twist early on, but how it played out in the story was a surprise to me. Overall very stylish. A favourite for sure :]
Hey :] Hope this is the correct place to ask. I was wondering how strict you are in your definition of visual novel? In particular about the layout and such. I've made a game with a very disco elysium style layout before, and would like to do it again, but I'm aware it's not the traditional vn look. Would it still be acceptable in this jam? Thank you :]
Cool that there's a web version now! My friend wanted to play but couldn't on her chrome book, I'll let her know :] And yeah, I also have very large images and was a bit worried about web performance but it seems to handle it fine
I like the concept and general mood/atmosphere of the story, and would love to read more one day. The art is lovely. I like the use of the theme. Unfortunately there were quite a few typos. which took me out of the reading experience, a little bit.
Pretty cute, wholesome entry! I like how you used the theme "Decay" in this one (I know on your page you said you didn't use it, but I definitely think it's applicable)
