I cant wait to stomp into a village and pillage!!
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| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Overall | #3 | 3.838 | 3.838 |
| Overall Appearance | #3 | 4.294 | 4.294 |
| Use of Theme | #4 | 4.176 | 4.176 |
| Quality of Writing | #8 | 3.765 | 3.765 |
| Mechanics | #14 | 3.118 | 3.118 |
Ranked from 17 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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This might be my favorite so far. It has a very Grendel feel to it. Here are the few thoughts I had while reading:
- That intro is perfect. I know exactly what's going on, who I am, and what I need to do about the situation. NICE! Also, you carry your theme and tone through the explanation of your rules!
- I love that the trolls are beings with ways and traditions and not just another monster. And you set those both up well.
- Troll looks section needed to be formatted differently. Content is great. Bullets perhaps.
- I would have liked a list of village scenarios for the trolls to deal with. And I'm sure with more time, it would be here haha.
- I wish that the Danger was not just 50% 50%. I don't know what a good fix might be for this but it feels not quite as polished as everything else. Maybe lesser (succeed on >3), regular (succeed on >6), and greater dangers (succeed on >9)? The A Troll Might Be section helps build the idea that there needs to be a strong force to deal with these trolls.
- I LOVE THIS FORTIFY & DEFEND SECTION!
Man, this ticked a lot of the boxes for me. Excited to see the final version of this (cause clearly you kept pushing on with this one). GREAT JOB!
I really like the concept and especially the base building concept you have in this
Your file size probably can be optimised a bit. For us poor Aussies with crappy internet infrastructure it's a bit big.
Good entry and good luck :)
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Super-Incident Response Unityep - we goofed. We hit our finish at 3 am, both of us with migraines, and messed up the file size! Hopefully we can get to a computer before the deadline and fix this. Also thanks!!
Edit: We did in fact get to a comp in time. It's still a little big but we compressed it as much as we could with 10 minutes to spare before the dead line! Hope that helps, yo!
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