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A jam submission

Noises by the campfireView game page

Short scary game where you put a bucket on a flame to hide from invisible monsters (Submission for Linux Game Jam 2022)
Submitted by umanochiocciola — 1 day, 6 hours before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Linux compatibility#24.9004.900
Completeness#183.5003.500
Intention#213.8003.800
Overall#233.6803.680
Presentation#273.2003.200
Implementation#323.0003.000

Ranked from 10 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

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Submitted

Cool idea! Turns out surviving in a dark forest is not that easy. Who knew?!

One thing I missed in terms of UI was more visual hints on what is clickable. In the beginning I didn't realize I can relight the fire.

Good job!

Developer

Thank you! If you toggle "tutorial", your companion will tell you how to relight the fire, but I agree a visual hint could be nice too, maybe only in the tutorial

Host

The downloadable binary worked well and had executable permissions set, etc., but I ended up running a modified version of the .py because I really couldn't have it extending over three monitors for a game that's not much bigger than 600x600 pixels.

I also fixed a crash when assembling the victory text, but I see that you resolved that in the meantime - good catch!

It took me a little while to realise that I could re-light the fire after snuffing it out. That's a nice mechanic that could perhaps be surfaced to users more directly.

The extra dialogue when clicking on your camping companion was a nice touch.

It's always nice to see a game with a beginning, middle, and end. Well done!

Developer(+1)

Thank you so much for the feedback! Yes the fullscreen is a bit rough, but pygame's one doesn't work with i3, so I made that dirty thing. Would you suggest adding an "hold" overlay to the snuffed fire, maybe only the first time you do it, to make it clearer?

Host

Ah ha, that makes sense. Personally, I prefer running everything in a window, so my workaround was a better fit for me than any properly behaving fullscreen mode would have been.

I think some kind of prompt or indicator might be a good idea. If it were my game, I'd probably lean toward having the other character respond to the fire going out and squeeze it in with that dialogue - though maybe that's not a good idea since it's easy to click through dialogue accidentally before having a chance to read it all.

One other thought on the re-lighting UI - since the bar was emptying, that made me feel like my embers were losing heat. Having the bar fill as it gets closer to being re-lit might be more intuitive.

Developer(+1)

wow we actually had the same thought process, I added in the refined version both a windowed option and a dialogue (if you enable tutorial dialogues) for lighting the fire back! There was the chance of you skipping it by accident, I initially just put an empty dialogue line before, but I just realized I already have a way to stop dialogue interactions with a timer. Also the bar growing instead of shrinking is a good idea, thank you!

Host(+1)

Fantastic! :D

Submitted(+1)

yeay I survived! very nice. I've really liked the lighthings and the rain, this really adds a lot to the ambience.

Developer

thank you!