A little too out of control. Maybe the crosshair moves wildly instead of the camera? Press at the right time to shoot.

This game was pretty unplayable for me. The mouse was way too sensitive, the goal was unclear, and the game was kind of boring to look at. Some color would have been nice.

funny writing! take what you learned from this one and use it to make your next game even better!

Funny idea. However I think the camera and the fact that you are just kind of thrown in the game, make for a somewhat confusing experience at first. 

I like the idea you've come up with! The story could be fleshed out into something really engaging and fun! As for the game I have two recommendations: Change the responsiveness of the camera to be less "floaty" and don't have all of the dialogue replay when you lose :D Overall I see a lot of potential in this idea! Good luck!