Very solid. The tutorials often came after I died to the mechanic, and the beginning tutorial didn't really tell me how to play the game. Perhaps playtesting would have helped you there. Once I got past that, the game was actually quite fun. I gave this a good rating overall, but I do think your presentation could use some serious work. Well done!

I like the visual style, I just wished the background wasn't so white. Also, I had no idea what was happening, or what I was or wasn't controlling, or what was a hazard or not. Take that as you will.