I absolutely love the style of you game! I have a soft spot for visual novels as a writer myself! Each character felt unique and important so great job there! I'd say at the beginning you may want to cut down on one of the dialog choices because it was really long and took awhile to get through each one. Also I got stuck in a loop at the end when Thomas is about to go on stage and you can wish him good luck or break a leg (Never wish an actor break a leg haha!) and it kept repeating the few lines before it! Not sure if that was a glitch or it just wasn't finished! Overall super great job and I loved the voice actor narrator! You took a big risk and it paid off!!!
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Avalon Community Theater's itch.io pageResults
Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
Visual Design | #2 | 4.500 | 4.500 |
Representation of Theme | #4 | 4.625 | 4.625 |
Engagement | #4 | 3.875 | 3.875 |
Overall | #5 | 3.975 | 3.975 |
Gameplay | #11 | 3.250 | 3.250 |
Functionality | #11 | 3.625 | 3.625 |
Ranked from 8 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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