I'm a bit torn... on the one hand, the story brings out the right emotions as is. On the other hand, I want more. Was it a nightmare, or is this a Groundhog Day situation? If it was a nightmare, what drives Ash's fear? You've set up an interesting world and characters here, and I'd like to go a little deeper.

Overall, nice work!

Short and sweet!

Really short and sad but nice~! Same criticism as Hero Robb in that I wish it went on a bit longer to explain why or what exactly happened~ But it got its narrative across really well which is great!

I liked this. Short and sad, but it also felt very sincere and sweet. The only criticism I can think of is that I wish it went on a bit longer, but I don't know how well that would work without making it a lot, lot longer. It was as long as it needed to be, I think.