Nice visual novel game. The story you were building and the use of theme were really interesting. The menu and UI looked really well done.

Man, making ren'py games is so damn fun! I can't wait to get back to it. This game was surprisingly dark! Was I having some kind of schizophrenic hallucination? Was my mind just drifting off to escape from my sad life? If I created this characters in my mind, why are they the way they are? 

Hey. I recorded a video about the Beginners Circle jam and included your game in it. If you want to cut your game out of the video, let me know. However, if you like the video, I make similar videos every day. I will be happy if you subscribe. Anyway, I enjoyed playing your game.

That was really cool. I haven't played a visual novel yet in these submissions and I liked the world you started to create. Keep at it!

I guess it's the first renpy creation I see which doesn't have some kind of adult content. It's like seeing a fake wax fruit, the brain is confused.

I think the story beginning is ok, but I wouldn't really go for replays if it wasn't so short. I also think you have the skills to complete it. The assets are ok, I wasn't looking at them very attentively though because reading takes a lot of attention.