Hello Max Stern! I played your VN about 2 weeks ago. I played through the whole thing in two sittings (first sitting I got to the noose part, and second to the end).

I was hitting PrtScn every time I saw some sort of spelling, or grammar error, because my plan was to pack all the screenshots, and send them to you, but after first day of playing and checking my screenshot folder I noticed the game did not get captured. I do not know if it's a ren'py thing, or the game specific (I played in full screen in a dark room), but I found 12 errors until the noose part. Sorry I cannot be more helpful, than that.

I really like your character art. It reminded me of some 70s anime. If they are placeholders, then I hope you are not going to alter them too much. They are very soulful.

I don't really read VNs. I also don't read detective mysteries. All the "bad choices" take you back to the checkpoint, and it looked like there is only one correct path, so it appeared to be more of a kinetic novel experience, but I looked into your files after playing so it looks like there is more to it. The ending I got with naming yourself broke I believe rule number 4, so that wasn't really right.

I found the story to be depressing for the most part. I am not a fan of stories were introduced characters get killed one after the other, especially when they are likeable. With that said, I found the parts that were meant to be funny, funny and charming. I found it odd how some situations, and conversations were taking place even though there were murders happening. I also don't really understand how, and why other characters were so trusting of the player character.

By the way, I wanted to name the character something really normal, so I went with "John", but my other choice was "Jack", which if the VN allows for would make the whole experience much more confusing.

I wish the VN had a pth with none of the students getting killed, but I guess it is not that kind of story.

Fun game, the beginning was a little rough to get into but it picks up after a bit, the art is very serviceable and the music choice is really on point. Kind of knew I didn't have the "true" ending when I named myself even though everything fit since the rules said that the detective could not be the culprit and you die killed by someone else in the bad endings. I checked the files to be sure and saw who I was supposed to name, I would not have thought about it being her otherwise. I did manage to solve the riddles afterwards by reading the relevant sequences again but honestly the "true" ending felt worse than the normal ending, maybe I was tired at that point but I didn't understand anything about it, seemed completely random.

Your mouse movement somehow feels floaty. I don't know why tho or if its maybe just me. I'm remembering I forgot to eat anything today just as I'm writing this.

Menu changes seem slow, it kind of blends into the next menu, would like them to be a lot faster.

I like your main menu music, very soothing. Why can I save from the main menu? there shouldn't be a save option there.

Intro has a bunch of missing font character image squares. Might be intended, but doesn't look like it.

Couldn't get a really good look at the protagonist through the computer, as it faded away too soon. 

Dialogue with the girl has "there's there's" written in when the basket guy appears. A lot of the Dialogue kind of comes of as pretentious to me, like everyones trying to sound smarter then they are. No Idea if that is how people actually talk tho. Still, it managed to attach me to the characters, I got pretty sad when Flame died. Who writes their Diary in notepad format? And in one without any of the key information the Notes are about aswell. And cutting up sentences? This really sounds more like talking to oneself then writing a diary.

You should've warned me that there was romantic handholding in this. ( just wish it were with Jack, he's cute). And after all that Handholding you're putting me with a basically naked Jack into a Sauna? Are you sure this isn't a lewd Game?

Why are the sandwiches getting cold? Sandwiches are cold to begin with.

Nice that I could poke Jack in the end, but why only then, why not earlier?

Just loaded the nameguess to get all the Endings, not going to bother with the different routes, ending itself was pretty boring, unless I missed an option (tried All the student names, professor, my own, eerie, and various phrases and words)

I had something I wanted to complain about pretty early on, but I forgot through playing the Game, sorry. If I ever remember it, I'll edit this comment, but I doubt it.

Still enjoyable overall tho, had me engaged for multiple Hours, didn't expect to play through it.