The story is adorable and covers some of my fav fetishes: Boss, Big bara guy, bigger guy being the bottom and my favourite: rimming.

I just hope the next one has a few more like: Bigger guy being dominant/rough and topping, putting all his weight lying on top of the smaller guy, blowjobs, muscle worship and/or even wrestling/fighting to fuck.

Another thing I'd wish for is more pictures of course lol. Most of the erotic scenes get our mind racing and we'd wish to see more of what's being described. Even those little moments like when there's a pat on the back or catching a glimpse.