A solid short story whose main flaw is that it's too short to properly invest in its worthy characters. I think that, with more practice at the craft of writing, or mixed media, it'd be criminal for How To Die On The Planet Earth to not get a re-do or some kind of revisit. I find it engaging, brutally honest, and still funny in spite of the situations it's in. Great stuff all around.
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