Eh, it's alright. Too simple. Main complaint I've got is that the text advances so slowly but hitting the spacebar skips the dialog completely, so if you're reasonably quick at reading, it's pure torture to sit there and watch the dialog slowly reveal itself.
Kinda iffy about "tried to make it look as much like real Undertale" when Toriel looks so, uh, stylized, though.
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