I bought this visual novel for the yuri/lesbian and the creepy/gore scenes. I wasn't disappointed. I could empathize with the heroine on some scenes. I could tell at the first look on the characters design and the heavy tags that I have to read this visual novel (also the trailer help it :) ). Even if there is no choice to make, I think that this kind of story is better told this way. I really like all the little effect you made (zooming, travelling, appear, moving a character from one point to another), the cut you made halfway a sentence and the use of bubbles along with the traditional bottom text to express your charcters. All these things made the whole experience really dynamic and unforgivable. Nice work ! I recommanded it.
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