I find the aesthetic extremely pleasing and some of the songs are absolute bangers, but overall I think I had a few too many issues. I had a difficult time being able to tell what was and wasn't a platform (like the paper with the dinosaur, I  was quite surprised when I  was able to stand on it) and some things like the paper holders I had to get hit by to realize they were dangerous and not a moving platform. Also going back and forth between the firemen and the rich guy over and over was just not fun and felt like needless padding. I  think it has potential though, keep at it!