After keeping this tab open for a few days, I just played through it once. I'm not sure what to write, but it is a very powerful game and I appreciate it a lot. I cried throughout it.
On a more technical note, as you seem to be asking about that too: I found it very well written. The pacing etc. felt very true and strong. I felt like I had the options to make the choices I actually wanted to and it never felt like the path I was on was written hastily as an alternative or something like that - great job.
It is very interesting how now I feel like I connect on a personal level even though you of course don't know me. It seems to me that with this game you have created a beautiful counterpoint to the journalistic theme that is part of the story and I sincerely hope that the amount of intricacy in emotion I see in this reflects a positive development in working on this for yourself.
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