It was a good but unfullfilling.  I felt that the plot was strange, too.  Mind control is nice, but it was not a realistic form of mind control.  Because people can only do what they themselves would consent to, this should have been taken differently.   Though I am trying to critique an erotic VN.  The art was extremely pleasing to look at, super cute.  The perspective threw me off once or twice, but otherwise it was a pleasing experience.  Thanks for creating the game :)