It has potential and the art is nice but it's very slow moving and gets a bit boring at times and takes way too long for anything to really happen.
A lot of unnecessary dialogue probably there just to force longer play time and the main character is a little obnoxious.
Goodluck with your project and I wish you lots of success.
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