So here’s my first impression of your game. It’s harsh and unforgiving. Please do not take it personally and feel free to contact me on discord Harlekin#0759 if you want to discuss further or want some more in depth advice.

Many Grammar issues.

Events feel very bland and amateurish.

First dungeon… Is that a random generated thing? Please no.

Mapping in general needs big improvement.

Why do I have to backtrack out of the dungeon after retrieving the hierloom? Just transfer the player out.

Combat is as basic as can be. Not unique features or mechanics.

Maiden stance is not worth using since normal attacks deal more damage especially when they crit.

The first city you start in has 1 living house, which is yours… The majors house, a shed and a storage house. However it’s 2 tiles wide on the world map. Where are the villagers? Where do they live?

Houses outside dimensions and shapes do not match their insides.

All npcs are liveless and stationary.

The story is absolutely boring. Everything just falls into the players hands and I didn’t need to use a single braincell thus far.

Why do I have to talk to the guards to talk to the queen so she can tell me to talk to the chancellor? Seems unnecessary…

Why do I need to buy a village when there is literally one available from the majors wife… She wants to sell it anyway and you could always just rebuild the place…

I’m stopping now… I’m too bored to bother playing longer in order to see a sex scene.

Overall the game has a really long way ahead of it before anyone should consider it anything more than a game you play for a fap and a fap alone. I’ll give the unique 3d Cutscenes credit tho. Very cool idea.

Points:

Mapping: Maps are way too big without any details or anything. They are pretty much all box shaped and will need big improvements.2/5

Music: Seems alright but not memorable. 2/5

Combat: Pretty much out of the box combat system. 1/5

Story: Not really sure what the story even is. Just some non human who lives alone in a city apparently helping out females for some reason. Everything that happens just… Happens, you’re handolded from one event to the next. No thinking or exploring required. 1/5