Slow and tedious story at first, suffers from TMI for around the first hour. However, once the story hits the "Samel Sequence", it gets MUCH better, smoother and more succinct story-telling. Consider cutting some fat out of the beginning and you'll have a fantasic game as it stands. Looking forward to seeing the project unfold!
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