The story is okay but there is a lot of bugs, error and some interactions repeats for example going out with Seth on Saturday would love Oreos as he didn't take it in so long and do it again with the same dialogue in the next day. Sprites also are not found by Ren'py, even main-characters are with place holder of a normal ren'py sprite in some situation as for example Day 10 Dialogue with Max.
In conclusion, there is a lot to fix to a point you can't enjoy the VN.
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