It always surprises me how poignant a simple video game can be. How can there be so much meaning and emotion and beauty in such a small package. I think this game could be the seed to something bigger.
My only advice, Give the user a hint about the controls to get them started. It took me a minute to figure out I needed to use the arrow keys.
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