I thought the game did a good job of what it set out to do, although some of the dialogue kind of undercut the environmental storytelling in my opinion. You did an excellent job of building a world that told a story for the player to discover, then also told that story aloud. However, I guess without it there is a good chance the player would gloss over everything. Just my two cents, really enjoyed the game!
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