Wow. As an aspirational storyteller, the emotions this game engendered in me so quickly and effortlessly leave me speechless.  I was on the verge of tears more than once and genuinely felt for everyone.  The structure and pacing were great and flowed beautifully. The erotic elements weren't for me but that's a personal opinion. They certainly didn't make the final product worse. I want to criticize the art, but I am no artist. I feel like the story deserves more detailed artwork with more time put into it. But then again, I can't say it was bad. Reviewing the experience it feels like a nitpick more than anything. The game left me sad and contemplative, but I don't have much else to say. Great work!