I think big time this visual novels suffers from the lack of a lot of things. It definitely has poor atmosphere. It's way too heavy with writing and not enough substance behind it. This story would probably do better as a novel than a visual novel. And lastly one of the most things that just kills it. Is the game is extremely glitchy. Moments were believe they're supposed to be camera changes in all the other arrangements. I was just focusing on a corner of a background. I think the story suffers from staying in act one way too long. That's when you take off you're so tired of being in the world that you really don't care to Unique little twist. I would have to say the artwork is though very beautiful.  that's probably one if it's throwing a suits