I would probably write this in 1.5. The reason being is I say one of the most things is the story is very slow. Even though I don't mind slow stories it seems to never picked up even out of deciding on this. The atmosphere is just not there to make you feel like you're running away or or in danger. It's more like a good best friends or LARPing in real life. I think one of the reasons being is is that it has a very modern dialogue for a very fantasy setting. So the character interactions are not that great or Genuine for the characters. It's more of a fan novel that was made than a story. I think the other factors who is the animations are very awkward looking. Especially the idle animations. The deform and stretching almost looks like they have issues with their body. They look like aliens trying to be human. Or everybody just has ants in their pants. I would say the animation is quite for on that aspect. And then lastly I think the other reason why dialog is suffering so much in this. Is that you can quite tell that the surrounding characters has voice acting. To make up for the lack of dialogue they give the player character double the amount. Which makes it over bloated and bogs the pacing down heavily. I think this is a big reason why in moments you do not feel the atmospheric ways. The only thing I can say positively is the overall plot has an interesting premise to it. Your character is in the hierarchy of leadership and now is running for his life. And I think that's a strong point is the plot. Unfortunately everything that is holding it up is still weak that it just tumbled in on itself.
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