FUUUUUUCK ITS SO GOOD ITS ALL OVER THE SCREEN
The first chapter is such a good introduction to this world and story! Mason is a really active protagonist who proves in every scene how interesting of a character he is and why he deserves the spotlight! His inner thoughts are so messed up and interesting to read which made me want to keep reading as soon as I got into the groove of things. The other characters on the Gemini Squad also left a great impression which makes me so excited to see where the story will take them in the next chapters to come! (with poor little Alister as my personal fav)
I also have to praise the worldbuilding as well. I love how the audience is thrown into this world without much of an explanation so we have to piece information together through what the characters say. The differient types of monsters, echoes, and the Mist in general keep things tense and open up so many oppurtunities for future scenes to expand upon!
im fujoing tf outtttt rn we need a sloppy mason alister victor makeout scene STAT /j
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