A well made short story that left me satisfied.
I really appreciated the subtly of Manjit's toxicity. Her jagged comments felt real, fueled by a mix of impatience, angst, and (in some part) love.
The art and music played their part well. I liked the detail that the eyes on Aiden's sprite were actually red after Manjit's transphobic joke.
Overall, I don't have much else to say other than that I look forward to Zapt's next project.
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