I enjoyed it overall- but it really relies on people understanding certain terms or making guesses if they aren't familiar. 

Consistency is odd- why would they allow Starlingdove to leave when it was a risk she was going to report the issue? Why didn't she disappear immediately?

Margo A's pic makes her look like she's in her 40's or 50's not mid 20's - her student record should be dated much earlier if you intended for her to be an older woman.

I went to college from 2005-2010 and find it hard to believe that people were that into student radio back then- the student radio broadcasted in the student center, and it wasn't that big of a deal. It was a big suspension of disbelief to think about how big these students were making it out to be- but then again, maybe not- they were big in their own heads- and the school paper would write about them even if the rest of campus didn't care.