The art and worldbuilding are phenomenal; the characters are unique and have their own relationships with the MC. The writing (a proofreader would help) does leave much to be desired, but there is a lot of promise! If the latest section with Vannyr is anything to base the rest of this game on, It will be an easy 5 star in the future. I don't want my 3 star review to turn anyone away because it is definitely worth the play, and I cannot wait for the next update!

I also want to mention that this game has one of the best in-game menus that i have ever seen in my time playing VNs. I know that doesn't mean a lot to most people, but it is honestly great!