this game was cool! but being critical, here are my thoughts:

• the jokes were quite funny! The story was enjoyable though a bit confusing. the jokes you choose don't seem to matter since there is no fail state, so ill be judging this as a story!
• as a story, the pacing seems off with just jokes (in the car) in one part, then right onto pages of straight dialogue (in the store), both parts are good, though they have a quick transition.
• quickly, i'd like to mention that it has little deviation from other Ren'Py games- it'd have been very cool to see some custom scripts/interesting features!