This Game is quite enjoyable to Play featuring some unique Graphics & Animations. The Story Progression is also really good with lots of Options & Surprises on the Way.

Logically & Technically though it has quite a few ~ ehm, quirks I'd say 😆

Technical Challenges:
→ Its Size featuring poorly compressed Video & Pictures.
→ Lots of Variations of (Full Screen) Scenes which make it bigger.
→ Unused Leftovers ~ Structure could be Improved.
→ Though in a few Places Game Design is actually efficient having separate Graphics for Characters and using small WebP Files. 👍
→ Total is 3,4GB in Images & 930MB Videos ~ Could be ~ 400MB for the Entire Game with even Better Quality AND Music
~ just saying ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

Logical Challenges:
→ As with many Games in this Genre: Things becoming repetitive.
I'd say it's doing a Good Job in that Regard =)
→ Time's rather imprecise to say it politely. You have Morning, Afternoon, Evening, Night and (almost) everything lasts the same time (with sometimes events not taking any time at all).
→ Earning Money's a bit unrealistic. But the Amount does increase over time. Just make Work a Time Segment shorter. A whole Day is certainly too much (unless you're Japanese, I guess :D).
→ The Game seems to want You to get Fat. Even if you do nothing to Gain Weight it seems you still gain a little.

There's more but I think this is enough for now =)
I also wrote Tips on how to make your Game from Good to Great!
I cut them off. Feel free to get in Touch if you'd like to hear.

Lastly I'd like to compliment You on creating a Game that's both Fun to Play and with almost no Bugs and no Major annoying or GameBreaking ones. That's quite admirable considering the speed in which you probably threw this whole thing together 😉