First time playing through.

Holy. Hell. I can count on one hand the number of AVNs that I've felt a strong initial emotional connection with the characters & the story. This is definitely one - well done. 

The beginning of the game up until the business proposal to the old guy in the potion shop: 5/5

After: 3/5

The amount of spelling & grammar mistakes makes it much less enjoyable.

Seriously? The first time MC & Stephi are together - he wears a rubber? Fucking lame. And what was that with him having to spread her legs?? She should have done that willingly

And what the hell was that? When the MC & mom were doing yoga together she was a judgmental fucking asshole.

When MC's talking w/ Stephi & Leo after MC & Catherine talked on the roof, Stephi's unnecessarily cunty, dramatic and negative toward MC - she should be more affectionate & endearing.

And what the hell is with Stephi being so sexually timid & prudish at school when her & MC were making out in the storage room?

The whole Catherine and Aden thing is so unnecessarily drawn-out; why doesn't MC just show Catherine the damn pictures of Aden cheating??

When MC & Stephi are in class just after MC & Nina fool around in the art room: why the hell is MC ok with Stephi giving him blueballs? That he would allow it - he's being a fucking pussy, and a girl that thinks that's ok doesn't belong in his harem.

And why the hell does Stephi think she has say in her & MC's relationship, just inviting Leo without even consulting MC??

Seriously, what the fuck is with all the push-back from Steph about commitment and getting pregnant, it's stupid. It's really damn annoying how Steph pretends to be equal to MC, acting all independent & thinking for herself. This bitch is really off-putting and kind of ruins the game

1/5

This is bullshit; the whole game is that the girls are consciously opposed to being with MC but their feelings are "won over & justified" through the physical pleasure they experience with MC. It's like the MC has to apologize for his existence; the girls should be consciously submissive and only wanting the MC

Oh my GOD is that off-putting: why the hell would the reader want to hear about MC's father from Jacky's thoughts?? 

First hearing Catherine's thoughts about her boyfriend & now Jacky's thoughts about Ashton, how is it at all desirable for any male but the MC to be the object of any girl's desire in this game?? 

Ok seriously steph blurting out that she wants Jacky & her dad to meet after MC said no - fuck that cunt; seriously, her character ruined the game; at the beginning of the game she had a likeable character, but now the game portrays her as the epitome of familiarity breeds contempt - thoroughly disgusting -1/5