Constructively I though Divine Heel was well produced. I loved the polished character design and the story wasn't a chore to follow; however (as it relates to dialogue), the use of onomatopoeia (words written as sounds) and misspelled typos deserved a better proof reading and editing process, but it didn't undermine the main theme.
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