The only thing that I disapprove of is the British version of the English language. I have watched many of their shows, but British slang was never my cup of tea.

The punctuation needs some work. Like using too many commas and commas when a period is needed.

British writing, US Dollars and Japanese characters? Is this some bizarre alternate reality? I'm so confused. Why is every AVN writer a Japanophile? I was in Japan for a few months in 1988. They are just people, not some race of gods or supermen. Interesting people, but they are still just people.

Yesterday night isn't how most English-speaking countries now say/write last night, especially when the writing is more modern and uses slang. 

It's written dammit or damn it, not damnit. 

One of the best!