I'm genuinely conflicted on my rating. 

Pros: the writing is very good. The characters feel lifelike and it's fun getting to know them. The parts of the story where the characters discuss their real lives are interesting. And the sex scenes are very good.

Cons: the D&D parts of the story are not interesting - I skipped through most of them. My biggest complaint is the way the female characters talk to the MC - Hannah and Emily in particular. It feels like they are condescending and rude to him, for no particular reason, and he just puts up with it. I think it's supposed to be playful banter but I found it to be annoying and too much.

That said though, I did finish the game and for the most part, I enjoyed it.