Sadly this game isn't about MalO. Like literally at all. It's about an Asian girl named Si-Won that you're literally forced to hook up with. And she's over 90% of the entire game's focus! The rest of the story is mostly just pointless filler. And most of the choices are also pointless as you're forced into a linear path.
Zellen was slightly interesting, because she actually forced some of the focus back to MalO! So if you're here for MalO like literally everyone else, this game isn't for you. I know this sounds overly harsh, but it's genuinely true. Which is unfortunate, because some of the MalO artwork is pretty nice, if not the story. But the game really needs to change the name to Si-Won...
My constructive feedback:
- Give MalO the most story focus. It's why people came to play a game prominently featuring her. The underlining story is about her, yes, but actual interaction is brief and overshadowed by Si-Won and even school work. Leaving her mostly as a background character.
- Trim the filler. An example being the lecturer talk. It isn't substantial at all. So having to sit through it was rather tedious.
- More dynamic choices. Most of the choices don't seem to matter in the end, as they funnel to the same outcome. Making multiple choices pointless.
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