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NoaCoconat rated Horse Magic

NoaCoconat rated a visual novel 16 days ago
A browser visual novel made in HTML5.

I'll start with the positives: 

- First off, the design of the characters is great, this developer never fails to push really beautiful models and art. Idk if they're props, but if they are damn I need someone to tell me where to find them cuz they be beautiful!

-  I like how in just a couple of interactions most characters were well set in their personalities. You could tell how most of them would react to the shenanigans going down pretty accurately which on something this short is a a really good quality.

- The scenes are hot, even if they feel a little bit short and rushed in some cases, even if they could honestly not be there at all (like they don't add on anything to the story really), they still make your blood go brrr.

- As a trans person, I can empathize with the constant panic of Kaiah and the paranoia of being found. There's nothing wrong with you, but there's also no correct answers on things as simple as bathrooms and showers, and even if you treat with utmost care and respect you never know if someone's gonna act weird and expose you. Like that one time a woman fucking walked into my shower without even asking ugh...that was such a difficult time, can't believe she didn't even noticed q.q 


Onto the negatives:

- Some sex scenes feel like there was some dialogue missing, making the start of them feel a bit off and sometimes disconnected from what's happening. They just kinda come out of nowhere and sometimes they don't make much sense where they are. AND Kaiah is like so off character all the time, it just feels out of wack altogether.

- On top of that, a good amount of times the description of what was happening wasn't what the art was showing, there are a lot of errors of misnaming and stuff like that, and narration set as if it was a character's dialogue, etc. Things that honestly could have been addressed at some point.

- I might be stupid but I couldn't find a save state option, which would've been nice for replaying the game.

- I heavily dislike the trope of "now you have a dick meaning you're stronger faster and better than most other women". It's just plain machista, and on top of that it plays into inaccurate transphobic rethoric that we can't just ignore in our current political climate.It doesn't play any real role on the story, it's just plain unnecessary. 

- You can tell the fx are reused from all their other games. They're not bad, but sometimes they were way too much noise and moans for what was happening. and in very short loops.

- The way she's scared and unable to hide the **9 inch dick in her pants** but everytime someone comes mid sex she just hides it with no problem is annoying.

- My biggest complain at the end, is that the part were sex wasn't a thing were pretty nice and daunting. I would love for a visual novel like this, skip the sex altogether, just gimme girls kissing and getting to know things they didn't know of each other while exploring their sexuality and what mess it can cause in their romantic life!!!!!