It's really good for a short story. Both bad endings were a good experience in the worst way, as it should be. Galvin's especially so, his bad ending art was devastating. Loved it. And both love endings were super sweet. And the voice acting at the beginning was nice too. However, having the very first choice choose your love interest is crazy. Took me way too long to realize that. Honestly my only real complaint is that there isn't more. Good job.