Really interesting demo and I like the characters already. Considering this was MTL, the English translation is pretty decent. There are a few errors in the text (like at times Nott is spelled Note) but it flows nicely overall. Mechanics and gameplay are straightforward, though I wish it was easier to just scroll back to redo previous dialogue and choices.

Between the two provided love interests, Nott's route seems very straightforward so far and it's easy to know what the 'correct' thing to do is. Ellio's is a little more nuanced and thus to me, more interesting. It's still early but this could make the choice between the two love interests a bit unbalanced.

Roman is also probably going to get thousands of fans yelling for him to be a love interest as well. I'm torn on whether or not to support this because he clearly seems to be hung up on someone, but he also had that part where he was lingering outside your door. I'd like to see him as a love interest but I think I'd understand if it wasn't possible due to something bigger in his backstory.

I think this has a lot of charm and potential, and would like to see more of this. Cool demo.