While I liked the twist of the protagonist's role in the story, putting you in the position of being the obsessed stalker. I just couldn't get behind the story, especially with the ending and the whole set-up/reason for you being obsessed with them. Even with the limitation of this being a story for a Game Jam.

Also with the title and the main menu, the title doesn't really fit, and the main menu feels like I should be expecting a different kind of short story.