Very well-written with charming characters and relatable stories. However, I feel the gift and work system could use some tweaking, and the minigame didn't make sense to me, especially since the I couldn't get back to the instructions after I accidentally clicked through them. I also wasn't a fan of how abrupt the hentai was at the end, and that combined with the less-than-professional quality of the art and "animation" I found myself wishing that it wasn't even a part of the game. I really did like the music though, and I'd love to hear more tracks suited to the events and locations on the screen rather than looping all of them in a row.

This game has a lot of potential, the writing is very solid and the characters are all endearing, but a lot of polish is needed to make this game truly shine, primarily on the hentai elements and maybe another pass or two at the English translation. It's mostly great, but some of the wording is ambiguous and awkward. Either remove the hentai aspect and focus more on building friendships with the girls, or make the transition to hentai smoother and less abrupt, and improve the scenes themselves. I really look forward to seeing this game develop further, and I hope this review helps; I fully expect this game to be 5/5 stars once you get to put more time into this game. Be proud of yourself and what you've created with your own hands and without AI bullshit!