The good

Excellent art, excellent girls, sexy scenes were original and steamy. It's a good (and too rare!) thing in adult games to assume focusing on only a few girls instead of too many. That way you really get to "know" them as characters.

The few voices bits are really well dubbed.

While the plot isn't so good itself, it's well written. Which is arguably more important ! It reads easily and is funny.

Overall excellent production value, especially for a free game.

The less good

• the crucial pillars of the story don't make sense. 
  • For example
    • why does Naomi need to ambush Theo to know where the girls await him ? She could simply follow him and jump at the last moment. 
    • Why does Naomi even need to know where they meet ? Since she knows of their culpability and is okay with killing them, why not take care of the girls before, with traps and whatnot, so she doesn't need to risk her life ?
    • etc...
  • Summary : it's obvious that the authors had a hard time making a scenario that would justify all at the time the porn, the "gameplay" and the setting, so they had to sacrifice consistency to make up for it. 
• why is it only partially voiced, at very random moments to boot ? 
• it's more of an illustrated book than a video game, since interaction is the bare minimum. A few choices over the whole course, who don't matter since you can always choose the other option for free.