Writing wise its pretty good with some big flaws. The hypno content is good but the charecters past relationships feel a little less good imo because they arent scenes you feel you saw as clearly. The game would benefit greatly from a harem route imo i am more ok with playing as a villian and just slowly hypnotising hot babes.  the game presents you as a villian but you also are kinda not. I feel it would be slightly better if it choose a lane.  the only major complaint i have is the calender gameplay is kinda annoying because many charecters can only be progressed on the same days as other charecters. which leads to at times multiple in game days of doing pretty much nothing. good game overall with some minor critques excited to eventually get back into it.