Excellent for your first game! I'm sure you practiced a lot before doing this, hard to believe this is your first project. xD
Story is short, but good. I really liked that the game didn't stall us by making us do useless tasks or similar stuff. There's really nothing more to say than this since everyone else must have already told you what they think.
Keep up the good work and good luck with future releases!
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