I like the concept and the platforming is mostly decent, but jumping onto higher platforms, especially ones with sloped edges, feels kind of weird.  The respawn mechanic seems to be bugged in such a way that I was able to walk off into the middle of nowhere after respawning because my water meter never refilled, and the 'death' animation never triggered again.  Some parts of the translation also need to be punched up as well; some parts of it were fine, but some parts of it were difficult to understand in English.