This is a 9/10 to be clear. I can't do half stars sadly.

This is excellent. The humor is sharp throughout, the characters are either likeable or delightfully devilish, and you make very good use of the Visual Novel medium.

The only complaint I would say is serious with the first 2 chapters was that Blythe cursing felt off, but it's been significantly toned down in chapter 3 so it felt much more appropriate for her (that may just be her being around her mom I don't know.

Chapter 3 was fantastic. I feel bad for Vance because he's ruining the vibe apparently and that's not true, he improves it TYVM. But in all seriousness every interaction with Vivaldia is hilarious, scratch that Vivaldia in general is hilarious. Please feature more of her I beg of you.

I loved Blythe's mom. She was just the right ammount of sympathetic while also being so condescending. Like I get where's she coming from and do know she wants Blythe to succeed but she's so bad at it. It's honestly one of the most realistic charcaters here which stands out in the Extra! cast (not that the Extra! cast is a bad thing, but her being so realistic pops in a good way)

I'm so excited for chapter 4, please have more Vivaldia and Vance. Just please