Reminds me of the good ol' games from 2000s were they tried to show you an emotional or messed up message behind all the weird stuff going on in the game.
While you did great on everything, the graphics don't stand out a lot for me. Mostly because of the wet textures (someone forgot to add glossy maps on the textures), and the somewhat bad scene building. I also think you forgot to make a proper menu... You did a custom logo for the itchio banner, why not use it on the menu as well?
Quality stuff aside, this was really well done, you just needed to polish some things here and there, that's all. Keep up the good work. :p
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