Look, I know giving it a 3 out of 5 stars is likely pretty harsh... But let me explain as to why I gave it that rating!!
To begin with, and in my personal opinion, I'm not exactly the biggest fan of the writing. That being because as I played through the game, it always felt very on and off---especially if you go on a hating route; Like it was on again and off again type of thing in regard to the y/n POV. If you still don't understand what I mean by this, think of it like this:
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Y/N: "I hate him!! He's not my boyfriend or let alone friend... He's a stranger and nothing more!"
Me: "Yeah right, along with all the things he's done to you along with practically SA you, that's 100% normal thing to feel."
Y/N: "...But I also don't hate him and he's just so attractive with his features...! And I've never had anybody love me this much before. But those thoughts aren't important.... Right?? I mean, despite the sick-ass things he's done, you can't deny that we have chemistry... I shouldn't be feeling this way...... But I just can't resist!!
Am I right? ..Hello?"
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Don't get me wrong, I think the preemies of the story is alright in a way, but I don't exactly think you had a good way of portraying Stockholm Syndrome if that was a basis you were aiming for when creating this. I also had the feeling of the game in a way was fetishizing rape/SA and the idea of stalkers in general.
Other than that, I really appreciate the efforts put into the game and hope my review doesn't hit you in the wrong way.
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