Very well written, and an interesting premise. The world is more interesting to explore than "Now and Then", which was already very well done.

I only have two minor issues: More and more of the game has been taken up by sex scenes. To a point where I'd prefer if they were cut by 50-60%.

Second problem is the personal stories of the characters are kind of dragging on. Progress on personal issues is so slow that is feels like its treading the same ground mutiple times. Plus much of the dynamic of the girls getting comfortable with the idea of sharing the MC feels much the same as in "Now and Then".

Still a highly recommended game, but I hope future updates breath some new energy into the story. Apart from the creature encounters, the last hours of the story are starting to blur together for me.