Very good. BUT... The writer butchers the English language, especially the common phrases and idioms.
The writer does not know what rigor mortis is. I will try to use simple words so that they can understand. After a person dies, there is a time while the body is still flexible. After a while, the body becomes very stiff. This is called rigor mortis. Rigor mortis does not apply to a living female's reproductive organs.
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